haiz

i wrote this in my mother ' s facebook ' wall :

this saturday my friends invite me celebrate my friends birthday at time square ...
can i go ??
that day i got teach until 1 then if i can go i will go after 2 with loo hong ( that girl that we go midvally with us one )
really really hope i can go
i will take care of myself very well de ...
...i not dare to talk in front of you because i dont want to have any quarrel between us ...
hope can settle in a peaceful way ...
really hope can go ...


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my friend need my answer soon ...

is this correct ???